Could this be improved? What do you think? (Win a Prize)

Working, if you can call it that, out of the comfort of your home has HUGE advantages, but also has a disadvantage in that, if you're not careful, you become a bit introspective and can end up believing in your own infallibility.

I was just preparing to use the capture page below in one of my advertising campaigns and thought to myself 'that's a pretty good page you've designed there Allan!'

And then realised, yes, I believe it's a good page - but is that the reality, or is it just my belief.

http://www.12path.com/12SCcssOpPAI/

Is it really so good?

Will it people viewing it be motivated to sign up for my 30 free day trial and the associated Quick Start email course?

Could it be improved and, if so, how?

What do you think about the page? 

How about letting me know and, as my way of saying thanks for the feedback, I'll pick the best one of the answers and give that person a free copy of my well received paid product, the Your Free Traffic Magnets Guide - how to drive 1000's of willing and targeted free website visitors to view your offers.

Just leave me a comment or email me from the Contact Form at http://www.StartBusinessMentor.com

Thanks,
Allan

AllanJames
(the StartBusinessMentor)
http://www.StartBusinessMentor.com

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